Film treatment focus group responses (Girls)

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• The results from this focus group response show me that this type of film appeals to one in three girls
• The general response showed that the film was, mainly, too violent and aggressive for two of their general likings
• I will take on board to emphasise emotion and perhaps give Tyson a love interest to entice more female viewers
• They stated that this particular genre of film wasn't to their personal liking but they thought the film had potential to be good
• the girl who was interested said the film seemed "gripping" which is what I was hoping for from a thriller genre'd film
• One of them stated that the treatment was "confusing" which may be biased to her immediate distaste of the film genre/plot, however the plot twists and turns is what I hope will make the film all the more engaging 
• Since 2 of the three girls stated they wouldn't pay to watch the film, I will have to make sure I tailer specific moments in the film to their specific requests i.e. romance and humour as well as visual or subtle displays of emotion from characters
• The concept of revenge seems to have been a hit since they all stated that's what excited them most about the film